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Nice twist!Weezelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-3059930546735978352010-01-23T18:59:33.469-05:002010-01-23T18:59:33.469-05:00Great word choice, and although I should have expe...Great word choice, and although I should have expected the ending I had no idea. But at least he's not a lawyer. :)Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-54163580964382429812010-01-23T17:06:14.850-05:002010-01-23T17:06:14.850-05:00You never know with those wards, do you? I was wo...You never know with those wards, do you? I was wondering what kind of business made more money than being a lawyer. 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I felt as though I were ...Love this Nick character. I felt as though I were watching an old black and white film. I actually pictured Humphrey Bogart in the role as Nick.<br /><br />Marissa, this was brilliant! My kind of story.<br /><br />Great Job!Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-71019807119108958802010-01-22T20:04:48.767-05:002010-01-22T20:04:48.767-05:00Loved the pacing, LOVED the last line. This had su...Loved the pacing, LOVED the last line. This had such a great black and white feel that really appealed to me.Karen from Mentorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685540761526680384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-35147517587434616542010-01-22T18:35:52.210-05:002010-01-22T18:35:52.210-05:00Sounds like Nick could have been a building contra...Sounds like Nick could have been a building contractor or something of the sort. Maybe he should have hit the books after all, so he could have at least figured out how to get away with it. His poor wife seemed surprised. Your characters always seem like real people to me...Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-11048012232122679802010-01-22T18:08:07.348-05:002010-01-22T18:08:07.348-05:00Very cool story. From looking like he was wronged ...Very cool story. From looking like he was wronged to proving he got exactly what he deserved, it was a satisfying story. Great job!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-11184039262582166702010-01-22T17:01:59.597-05:002010-01-22T17:01:59.597-05:00And justice was served. Cool.And justice was served. Cool.Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168273312704732896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-80650030408367822982010-01-22T15:36:57.645-05:002010-01-22T15:36:57.645-05:00I didn't anticipate that ending, Marisa! Good ...I didn't anticipate that ending, Marisa! Good misdirection. I'd say the old guy had it coming to him... Nice story.Skycyclerhttp://skycycler.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-4822061702617439882010-01-22T14:54:28.569-05:002010-01-22T14:54:28.569-05:00Better a killer than a lawyer, I say. Great story,...Better a killer than a lawyer, I say. Great story, Marisa. I do wonder if Uncle was actually "Dad," but it's a nice hook that's keeping me thinking after the stories over. Actually, there's a good bit of that here. It's the sign of a good story. 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Even with all the clues I d...This was great Marisa!<br />Even with all the clues I didn't figure it out until I read the ending.<br />Loved the choice of words in the last line: "the only home he never had."Estrella Azulhttp://estrella05azul.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-40862805102723115062010-01-22T12:59:34.605-05:002010-01-22T12:59:34.605-05:00Marisa. . .
AWESOME! I always get such a kick ou...Marisa. . .<br /><br />AWESOME! I always get such a kick out of these kinds of stories - rich uncles, murder, money. . . perfect.<br /><br />I was not expecting the ending at ALL which makes it work even more!<br /><br />Nice job.<br /><br />JimJim Bronyaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09580674307591916148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-83205047841702955292010-01-22T12:59:19.006-05:002010-01-22T12:59:19.006-05:00Fabulous job with the characters, and the story, a...Fabulous job with the characters, and the story, as usual Marisa. I too hope we'll see a follow-up for Nick. Fun stuff!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-86358163747717972372010-01-22T12:45:38.286-05:002010-01-22T12:45:38.286-05:00Yes, like others I was drawn in immediately. I lov...Yes, like others I was drawn in immediately. I loved the wife and how you sketched there relationship so elegantly. Really enjoyed this, thank you!Emma Newmanhttp://www.enewman.co.uknoreply@blogger.com