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So sad.
So well...Why do they always choose the gun?<br />So sad.<br />So well done, Marisa.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-73388283392270530792010-05-03T06:53:06.610-04:002010-05-03T06:53:06.610-04:00Spot on dialogue. This was wrenching, and the titl...Spot on dialogue. This was wrenching, and the title really added another level to the story. Really well done.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-88563925650567390132010-05-02T20:38:50.908-04:002010-05-02T20:38:50.908-04:00Wow, so sad. Terrific story. Really rips at the he...Wow, so sad. Terrific story. Really rips at the heart.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-41619109449940880912010-05-02T18:47:03.146-04:002010-05-02T18:47:03.146-04:00Oh no...I feel really bad for him. 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Well done.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-81679520821559757542010-05-01T21:43:38.795-04:002010-05-01T21:43:38.795-04:00Well written, heartbreaking, tragic--what others h...Well written, heartbreaking, tragic--what others have said already. You do an great job with the dialogue as well!Christian Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03160609304010597116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-56433179942196761232010-05-01T09:39:51.841-04:002010-05-01T09:39:51.841-04:00Sad story. Why does the wrong choice always seem ...Sad story. Why does the wrong choice always seem so easy?Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-6755489793784124472010-04-30T21:42:06.784-04:002010-04-30T21:42:06.784-04:00I held my breath... hoping he would make the "...I held my breath... hoping he would make the "right" decision.<br /><br />Very real, and very sad.<br />Great post.<br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-56661171590688258492010-04-30T19:57:52.039-04:002010-04-30T19:57:52.039-04:00Whoa. I feel like Joey pointed that gun at me and ...Whoa. I feel like Joey pointed that gun at me and shot. Still reeling. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-58298473633818593312010-04-30T18:34:42.282-04:002010-04-30T18:34:42.282-04:00It's hard to see how a boy could overcome odds...It's hard to see how a boy could overcome odds like that. Made me think about a line from a Bob Dylan song: "broken, everything's broken", which echoes a speech I heard from Jessie Jackson once. He eloquently described a neighborhood like the one Joey lives in, where "everything's broken."Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-73841472724816041862010-04-30T17:44:15.245-04:002010-04-30T17:44:15.245-04:00Very powerful. Gang members are people, too. The...Very powerful. Gang members are people, too. They just make different choices for reasons most of us can't understand.Karly Kirkpatrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05032213203101470326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-58632112068410540082010-04-30T17:37:05.066-04:002010-04-30T17:37:05.066-04:00Oh lord, poor Joey. Loved that last bit...Oh lord, poor Joey. Loved that last bit...Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-30848707818301395982010-04-30T17:26:36.629-04:002010-04-30T17:26:36.629-04:00Well written story!Well written story!Weezelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-89544522218814508482010-04-30T17:09:34.122-04:002010-04-30T17:09:34.122-04:00Dark and gritty. Good job.Dark and gritty. Good job.Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168273312704732896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-36578321053239312992010-04-30T17:03:15.143-04:002010-04-30T17:03:15.143-04:00So sad and happens so often. Nicely written :)So sad and happens so often. Nicely written :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-82028973698531171552010-04-30T16:13:34.332-04:002010-04-30T16:13:34.332-04:00Beautifully written, Marisa, and just heartbreakin...Beautifully written, Marisa, and just heartbreaking. I was pulling for Little Joey right up to the horrifying last sentence.<br /><br />Excellent story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-28925228440316286382010-04-30T13:05:27.918-04:002010-04-30T13:05:27.918-04:00Oh my, what a sad, but very realistic tale. You ha...Oh my, what a sad, but very realistic tale. You had such wonderful dialogue that really spoke in their voices. Very well-written.Anne Tyler Lordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-25910366204355283772010-04-30T13:04:54.530-04:002010-04-30T13:04:54.530-04:00Oh my, what a sad, but very realistic tale. You ha...Oh my, what a sad, but very realistic tale. You had such wonderful dialogue that really spoke in their voices. Very well-written.Anne Tyler Lordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-20757371798302416932010-04-30T12:27:05.716-04:002010-04-30T12:27:05.716-04:00Children leading children into a life of hell. Cru...Children leading children into a life of hell. Crushing. :-( Well written, though.shannon espositohttp://murderinparadise.com/noreply@blogger.com