tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post21655295115942953..comments2010-07-08T04:58:48.748-04:00Marisa Birnshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-11021328171239968122010-07-08T04:58:48.686-04:002010-07-08T04:58:48.686-04:00I like your blog !!Thank you. 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Great work!vdemetroshttp://vdemetros.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-62034378022265132142010-05-27T16:52:35.663-04:002010-05-27T16:52:35.663-04:00From beginning to end - eerie!Aletahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05605214202876973830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-81665401120138876402010-05-25T16:04:07.406-04:002010-05-25T16:04:07.406-04:00Sad and chilling.ganymederhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-84098939883920390462010-05-24T13:33:19.136-04:002010-05-24T13:33:19.136-04:00Poor Ella! Of course, being a kid, she&#39;d blame herself even if it wasn&#39;t her fault.<br /><br />Chilling. There was something about the first sentence that threw me off. The &quot;when her sleep was interrupted&quot; made me think it was going to be a general sort of situation, so it took me a moment to orient. <br /><br />Other than that, well done!<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-40494649955810924442010-05-23T11:55:53.452-04:002010-05-23T11:55:53.452-04:00What a grim turn at the end. Nicely done.Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-42736034443734024852010-05-22T22:05:22.806-04:002010-05-22T22:05:22.806-04:00Oh my God. That ending took my breath away.<br /><br />Just well done, just well done.<br /><br />I was once told that short-shorts, flash fiction, should grab the reader by the throat - and not let go.<br /><br />This did and didn&#39;t - in spades.<br /><br />I shall now go don a hat that I might doff it to you.KjMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-85074261847045302402010-05-22T11:51:53.552-04:002010-05-22T11:51:53.552-04:00Oh, creepy, creepy, creeeeeepy. <br /><br />I love it.<br /><br />That&#39;s an opening to a book, you know.<br /><br />Helen<br /><a href="http://straightfromhel.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Straight From Hel</a>Helen Gingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-79151562484158504042010-05-22T01:21:06.730-04:002010-05-22T01:21:06.730-04:00What a twist, indeed. Kudos! Great tale...Bukowski's Basementhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-77654722963561679692010-05-22T01:08:07.352-04:002010-05-22T01:08:07.352-04:00Nice little twist at the end! A well told story and a nice punch at the end. A great bit of storytelling in a short span. :)jdanetylerhttp://jdanetyler.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-57881249435229702812010-05-21T22:35:53.256-04:002010-05-21T22:35:53.256-04:00Fun. Nearly caught me off guard.David G Shrockhttp://www.dracotorre.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-74878804635200280372010-05-21T19:47:04.917-04:002010-05-21T19:47:04.917-04:00Nasty twist. It certainly made the goose bumps race up my nose, over my skull, and midway down my back.AidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-30002561402521206442010-05-21T19:14:46.797-04:002010-05-21T19:14:46.797-04:00They&#39;re pretty good to Ella, given that she&#39;s a murderer. Guess it was more of an accident than a &#39;Joshua&#39;-type killing, but still. She&#39;d better wish to the stars for forgiveness.John Wiswellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-88710027743595613452010-05-21T19:10:18.948-04:002010-05-21T19:10:18.948-04:00Oh my, so simply told and so gripping. Your characters have captivated me once again.Anne Tyler Lordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-92185194714098407982010-05-21T18:52:14.257-04:002010-05-21T18:52:14.257-04:00Yikes! Creepy one this time!Jemi Fraserhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-78728982036974033462010-05-21T16:58:54.377-04:002010-05-21T16:58:54.377-04:00This is different for you. I wonder if daddy is nuts because he knows...Mark Kerstetterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-88595096957834832012010-05-21T16:41:20.716-04:002010-05-21T16:41:20.716-04:00Chilling! Nice, convincing telling right up until the twist at the end!Christian Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03160609304010597116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-29937596242690078752010-05-21T16:35:20.377-04:002010-05-21T16:35:20.377-04:00Oooh the old bait and switch. My thought process was as follows: Poor girl, poor little thing, her mummy&#39;s dead, her father&#39;s mad, she saw her die, poor poor, holy fuck! She&#39;s a little murdering bitch, I bet the grandma&#39;s next.Barry J. Northernhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05173472793304574269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-14268289220539338982010-05-21T16:09:25.448-04:002010-05-21T16:09:25.448-04:00ok, you got me with that ending!!Julie (Okami)http://www.blogger.com/profile/17102550169423011863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-35338970018712888752010-05-21T12:19:07.919-04:002010-05-21T12:19:07.919-04:00Wow, punch in the gut! Great story. Loved the voices here. And that twist-- you totally got me. Wasn&#39;t expecting that at all.<br /><br />Excellent, hair-raising story.Graciehttp://gmotley.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-18372082159716193132010-05-21T11:57:51.878-04:002010-05-21T11:57:51.878-04:00Whoa!!!! Wasn&#39;t expecting that at all! There were quite a few &#39;whoa&#39; moments in there. Well done. I look forward to reading your stories every week.V.R. Leavitthttp://www.vrleavitt.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-33518073204083607922010-05-21T11:52:38.200-04:002010-05-21T11:52:38.200-04:00So many assumptions as I read this, and they all came crashing down when I read the last sentence. Very chilling indeed.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-50289752929474892962010-05-21T11:15:19.334-04:002010-05-21T11:15:19.334-04:00That&#39;s it. Angie is the queen of cliffhangers and you&#39;re the queen of twisting ends, heh. :P<br /><br />Great piece Mari-girl, gave me the chills, literally!mariblaserhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08570428969140414779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-78396600310539181632010-05-21T10:58:03.430-04:002010-05-21T10:58:03.430-04:00Grammy was wonderful... the twist a complete surprise.Cathy Olliffehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-91100524204252004182010-05-21T10:41:54.997-04:002010-05-21T10:41:54.997-04:00What a twist!<br />Very good.Carol Kilgorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15168273312704732896noreply@blogger.com