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Appreciate that. Looking forward to more of your work.Dorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05953973448175171825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-50749174660529767342010-02-03T13:17:47.291-05:002010-02-03T13:17:47.291-05:00I want to read the rest of the book that is attach...I want to read the rest of the book that is attached to this post! Excellent!Aletahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05605214202876973830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-13855161957424312372010-02-02T21:00:52.434-05:002010-02-02T21:00:52.434-05:00Very interesting. Surprised at the end. I like t...Very interesting. Surprised at the end. I like the way you've written this piece. Also, I love you're Our of Order Alice heading/description. It made me want to come in and check things out.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-29280658548656296012010-02-02T18:39:00.922-05:002010-02-02T18:39:00.922-05:00This is so funny in the truest sense that humor al...This is so funny in the truest sense that humor almost always comes from some kind of hurt. In a sick way, I'm kinda glad he finally bested his brothers.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my blog today. Yours is terrific and I'll be back.Ronda Laveenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03902846545309643023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-31306525359563482122010-02-02T16:58:09.854-05:002010-02-02T16:58:09.854-05:00At first I was a bit confused with the helicopter ...At first I was a bit confused with the helicopter reference, but the explanation and the story's development totally hooked me. Great one Marisa! :)Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08570428969140414779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-4935414548247009392010-02-02T08:50:37.555-05:002010-02-02T08:50:37.555-05:00An unexpected ending. After the violence, I though...An unexpected ending. After the violence, I thought it would end in violence, too.<br /><br />Helen<br /><a href="http://straightfromhel.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Straight From Hel</a>Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-66208552213776180292010-02-02T03:25:50.649-05:002010-02-02T03:25:50.649-05:00It astonishes me you have all these stories in you...It astonishes me you have all these stories in your head. I can barely scrape up my novel ideas?? <br /><br />Good stuff, Marisa!<br /><br />Corra<br /><br /><a href="http://corramcfeydon.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">from the desk of a writer</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-27377286391776443792010-02-01T13:42:06.051-05:002010-02-01T13:42:06.051-05:00Those voices make mine look like the Golden Girls,...Those voices make mine look like the Golden Girls, most of the time.<br />Very nice writing with a good finish.EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-80039047357195117732010-02-01T06:14:37.765-05:002010-02-01T06:14:37.765-05:00Cracking opening, with a great use of narrative st...Cracking opening, with a great use of narrative style to hint at the diction and voice of the character. Good stuff.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-16522633795223752742010-01-31T07:16:35.979-05:002010-01-31T07:16:35.979-05:00I enjoyed this story very much. I too was expecti...I enjoyed this story very much. I too was expecting him to go out in a blaze of glory, or to shoot himself. Hopefully the fact he didn't means there may be a sequel to this story, right?Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-56813420830734915242010-01-30T21:19:09.250-05:002010-01-30T21:19:09.250-05:00Very, very powerful. Thanks for sharing it.Very, very powerful. Thanks for sharing it.Misty Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10900414309618213580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-78202639557992408822010-01-30T16:18:46.468-05:002010-01-30T16:18:46.468-05:00In spite of his insanity, it seems to me he wanted...In spite of his insanity, it seems to me he wanted to stay alive so he could get "credit" for what he had done ... very creepy!PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-58461144967519594252010-01-30T11:24:23.654-05:002010-01-30T11:24:23.654-05:00Great pacing. Very intense. I was expecting a dif...Great pacing. Very intense. I was expecting a different ending. But this one leaves room to hope he gets some help.<br /><br />Great job!Karen from Mentorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685540761526680384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-73217508248850172992010-01-30T05:57:09.551-05:002010-01-30T05:57:09.551-05:00I was also thinking X-Files while reading, very in...I was also thinking X-Files while reading, very interesting way of making us feel sorry for a killer :)Estrella Azulhttp://estrella05azul.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-53149911334319264672010-01-29T23:35:45.964-05:002010-01-29T23:35:45.964-05:00Billy Parker isn't someone I'd care to mee...Billy Parker isn't someone I'd care to meet. Good job.Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168273312704732896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-48374034134424587492010-01-29T20:56:33.346-05:002010-01-29T20:56:33.346-05:00Love the fact he didn't die in the end. Chill...Love the fact he didn't die in the end. Chilling and realistic. Great piece.Chris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-63020989240251784762010-01-29T19:26:14.439-05:002010-01-29T19:26:14.439-05:00Like a shot of whiskey, good stuff.Like a shot of whiskey, good stuff.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-64505465871231826292010-01-29T19:14:09.180-05:002010-01-29T19:14:09.180-05:00I loved the voice in this, particularly, 'I fi...I loved the voice in this, particularly, 'I finally bagged me something big.'<br /><br />The Piggly Wiggly is such a fantastic name too!<br /><br />Really enjoyed reading this and could really imagine the whole scene. Great!Mel Mortonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-547730439922473072010-01-29T16:45:34.100-05:002010-01-29T16:45:34.100-05:00There is something about your writing voice that h...There is something about your writing voice that has a real lilt to it - the little reading voice in my head sounds American. Seeing as I am most definitely British, that's a surprise to me and real compliment to you!Emma Newmanhttp://www.enewman.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-7810466930953251812010-01-29T15:29:01.918-05:002010-01-29T15:29:01.918-05:00This seems ripped from the headlines, it's so ...This seems ripped from the headlines, it's so authentic. Especially Billy's voice. I do believe you nailed this characterization. I didn't real feel sorry for him, though. I was kindof hoping he would shoot himself in the end. Well told!shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32297227.post-43070538425771850702010-01-29T14:56:40.285-05:002010-01-29T14:56:40.285-05:00Expertly written with careful precision.
The myst...Expertly written with careful precision.<br /><br />The mystery builds up well with gradually increasing tension and avoids falling into melodrama.<br /><br />Can we here more about the goings on at the Piggly Wiggly sometime?David Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809185582216906363noreply@blogger.com