Comments on Out of Order Alice: The Barkeep

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Hey Mari-girl! Sorry I'm so late. I've bee...

2010-06-10T16:38:26.487-04:00

Hey Mari-girl! Sorry I'm so late. I've been absent from everyone's great stories. * sniffles*

I liked your story, but I got a bit lost with all the "he" you used. No names on this one? heh ;P

Love the ending! Wasn't expecting that, I can ...

2010-06-10T11:16:45.721-04:00

Love the ending! Wasn't expecting that, I can see now why he had to move so often!

Ah, what a perfect job for him, well, at least whi...

2010-06-09T08:46:30.471-04:00

Ah, what a perfect job for him, well, at least while he is traveling.

I love that idea of having a real vamp in with the role players!

Wonderful story! Love the idea of the real thing w...

2010-06-08T16:56:57.603-04:00

Wonderful story! Love the idea of the real thing watching the ones playing at being vampires on the weekends.

great story....the things people do..drunk or not....

2010-06-07T15:22:23.001-04:00

great story....the things people do..drunk or not...lol

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So well written. Grabbed me with the first line an...

2010-06-07T11:56:33.182-04:00

So well written. Grabbed me with the first line and I couldn't stop reading. I'll be back!

Fantastic Marisa! Somehow I never pictured you wri...

2010-06-07T05:22:55.033-04:00

Fantastic Marisa! Somehow I never pictured you writing about vampires, but you pulled it off well.
What strikes me the most about ALL your stories are your first and last lines - always perfect.

Ohhhh - I hate vampires - I think in some other li...

2010-06-06T16:36:23.097-04:00

Ohhhh - I hate vampires - I think in some other life I must have been chased by one *laugh* - but, I love werewolves - so maybe instead I was in rivalry with a vampire in another life -

love the vividly drawn images here....

Centuries older than his clientele, he certainly w...

2010-06-06T14:02:19.129-04:00

Centuries older than his clientele, he certainly would be more bite than lark. Well glimpsed Marisa, for bartenders' muses are the see-all.

Lovin' the way your grand fan base see all too - Tony and Cathy had me grinnin' as much as the thumbsuck action. ~ Absolutely*Kate

So what, pray tell, is in one of those "Blood...

2010-06-06T12:36:06.088-04:00

So what, pray tell, is in one of those "Bloody Vampires?"

I like the different takes on vampirism you and I present. Yours being the predator and mine the prey.

Enjoyed the story. Hmm...smells of spilled blood, ...

2010-06-06T10:55:03.914-04:00

Enjoyed the story. Hmm...smells of spilled blood, and a sequel...

He showed a lot of restraint, working in that bar....

2010-06-05T17:59:07.683-04:00

He showed a lot of restraint, working in that bar. Loved the last line. And why not? One for the road, so to speak...

Appreciate all your comments. Thank you!

2010-06-05T15:10:11.065-04:00

Appreciate all your comments. Thank you!

I really liked this! Brilliant! Great stuff. '...

2010-06-05T10:10:16.237-04:00

I really liked this! Brilliant! Great stuff.

'drunk on alcohol and fantasy.' is a killer line!

I really liked this! Brilliant! Great stuff. '...

2010-06-05T10:09:39.423-04:00

I really liked this! Brilliant! Great stuff.

'drunk on alcohol and fantasy.' is a killer line!

Well done! Love the bartender character, and real...

2010-06-04T22:41:36.235-04:00

Well done! Love the bartender character, and really, the poseurs get what they deserve here!

I was looking for #fridayflash vampires yesterday,...

2010-06-04T21:44:00.222-04:00

I was looking for #fridayflash vampires yesterday, and poof delivered. Nicely done.

What a fun character! Great stuff :)

2010-06-04T20:27:57.769-04:00

What a fun character! Great stuff :)

Can we hear more from your bartender? I think he&#...

2010-06-04T19:31:03.469-04:00

Can we hear more from your bartender? I think he's badass!

If you are going to playact, it behooves you to be...

2010-06-04T19:17:45.802-04:00

If you are going to playact, it behooves you to be on the watch for the real thing - just in case.

This one built nicely though to story. I knew someone was likely to come to a bad end - maybe the guy ordering "two bloody vampires"?

Careful what you wish for.

Well done.

Pff... poseurs. Is there anyone they don't...

2010-06-04T17:29:37.705-04:00
Pff... poseurs. Is there anyone they don't annoy? ;)

Well done. Must be hard to be surround by food like at a banquet and not be able to eat.

A fun read. :)

Enjoyed reading this -- I love a good vampire stor...

2010-06-04T15:51:08.005-04:00
Enjoyed reading this -- I love a good vampire story. The picture worried me a little, but I liked the way you tied it into the story. I am hoping he picks the rude young man as his meal. ;-)

Great story and great character. I loved his quiet...

2010-06-04T14:28:44.299-04:00
Great story and great character. I loved his quiet, slightly sinister voice amongst all the noisy vampire party people. ~ Olivia

I have to love this post. First, because I like V...

2010-06-04T13:07:15.147-04:00
I have to love this post. First, because I like Vampire books. I admit it. Second, because though I love vampire books, I never plan on donning a fake set of teeth and drinking blood! There are some strange people out there who want to "join a club" of fantasy. Strange, yup. Excellent job!